Proposal Feedback: Fragile Families

[gevans6]

You are aware that your scope is pretty daunting, so I would try to center around a particular decision context that can be achieved during the quarter. Your proposal seems like you are going in a direction and feel like you will just figure out what you will end up turning in when the time comes. I would recommend writing about something small, and then if you have more time or that small thing leads to another, pursue that, instead of trying to cover every base and picking pieces from each as your final artifact.

I think your data set is very interesting and I think your artifact will be useful. See if you can see when these crimes occur and if that data changes the route that the user should take (if they are walking home at 10pm vs 2am).

Overall your description is detailed and answers just about every question that needed to be answered.