Merge pull request #59 from CXwudi/publish

more fluent and friendly

content/posts/2023/vocaloid-entry-guide/listen-old-songs/index.en.md

@@ -59,11 +59,11 @@ Vocaloid has been around for 10+ years. Numerous Vocaloid songs were created by
 
 Therefore, **listening famous Vocaloid songs in the history** is the best way to get familiar with Vocaloid.
 
-The order also matters. It's better to listen them **in the order of release date**. By doing so, you get a feeling of how Vocaloid history goes.
+<!-- The order also matters. It's better to listen them **in the order of release date**. By doing so, you get a feeling of how Vocaloid history goes. -->
 
-Of course, it can't be that easy to get known to Vocaloid history by just listening songs. Hence, when you listen a song you like, I highly recommend you to search about the Vocaloid Producer who made that song, or the wiki about that song, or any interesting story behind that song. We hope that by searching these information, we can **gather pieces of information and slowly build up the whole picture of Vocaloid history**.
+Of course, it can't be that easy to get known to Vocaloid history by just listening songs. Hence, when you listen a song, it's also better to search about the background of this song, like the Vocaloid Producer who made that song, the wiki about that song, or any interesting story behind that song. We hope that by searching these information, we can **gather pieces of information and slowly build up the whole picture of Vocaloid history**.
 
-{{< admonition type=tip title="Some helpful resources" open=false >}}
+{{< admonition type=tip title="Where to search?" open=true >}}
 Here are some wiki that might be helpful for you to search any event happened in Vocaloid history, or any information about a particular song:
 
 - [Vocaloid Wiki](https://vocaloid.fandom.com/wiki/Vocaloid_Wiki)
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ Similarly we have a YouTube version, but for ten million views: (because hitting
 
 - [YouTube上播放数量超过1000万的VOCALOID歌曲](https://zh.moegirl.org.cn/VOCALOID%E7%A5%9E%E8%AF%9D%E6%9B%B2/YouTube%E6%8A%95%E7%A8%BF)
 
-Nice, we have the song list, but hold on, there are soooooooo many songs 😱 (800+ by the time of writing this post). We don't have the effort to listen all of them, don't we? So, we can sort the Hall of Legend song list in a certain order, and then based on your patient level, you (as a Miku fan) decide how many songs do you want to listen.
+Nice, we have the song list, but hold on, there are（by the time of writing this post) 800+ songs in the list 😱. We don't have the effort to listen all of them, don't we? So, we can sort the Hall of Legend song list in a certain order, and then based on your patient level, you (as a Miku fan) decide how many songs do you want to listen.
 
 ### Sorting the Hall of Legend song list
 
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ First, let's draw a table like following:
 
 Basically, we divide the song list into cells based on release date and the time taken to reach 1M views. Next, we walk the table row by row. In each row, we walk the cell from left to right. In each cell, we find songs that satisfy the condition. For example, the first cell is songs that released in 2007 and hit 1M views within 100 days. Then we listen to these songs before moving on to the next cell.
 
-So why do we make such a table? Well, let's talk about the meaning of each row:
+So what is the point of this table? Well, each row has a significate meaning:
 
 - First Row: These songs hit 1M views in the very short time (within 100 days). These songs make **great impact to the Vocaloid history**. Hence we should listen to these songs first. Some examples are [メルト](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm1715919), [千本桜](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15630734), [砂の惑星](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm31606995), [乙女解剖](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm34470195), and etc.
 - Second Row: These songs hit 1M views within 365 days. A year of time tbh is still a short period. These songs, although are not as famous as the first row, usually becomes **the symbol in the year**. For example, [magnet](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm6909505) from 2009, [夕景イエスタデイ](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21513190) from 2013, [太陽系デスコ](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm30469574) from 2017, [まにまに](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm40349788) from 2022, and etc.
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ So why do we make such a table? Well, let's talk about the meaning of each row:
   For those who are impatient, you can stop by here, but I still highly recommend you keep on going to the third row if you can.
   {{< /admonition >}}
 
-- Third Row: This row contains a lot of songs (maybe around 300~500?). It takes pretty long time for these songs to reach 1M views, but still, that is 1M views. In this row, you will experience the **wide diversity of Vocaloid music style**, and see how different era in Vocaloid history have different style of Vocaloid songs. That's why I still highly recommend you finish listening to songs in this row.
+- Third Row: This row contains many songs (probably around 300-500?). These songs took a considerable amount of time to reach 1 million views, but still, they achieved that milestone. In this row, you will experience the **different styles of Vocaloid songs from different eras**, showcasing the **diversity of Vocaloid music styles** that has accumulated over the years. That's why I strongly recommend listening to the Vocaloid songs in this row.
 
 {{< admonition type=warning title="Please be aware of fake views in Niconico" open=false >}}
 Some songs have fake views. In another words, some people use bots to massively increase the view count of a song.

content/posts/2023/vocaloid-entry-guide/listen-old-songs/index.zh-cn.md

@@ -56,19 +56,17 @@ Vocaloid（简称V家）已经有10多年的历史了。不同的Vocaloid Produc
 
 因此，**听历史上有名的V曲**是熟悉V家的最好方式。
 
-顺序也很重要。最好是**按照发布日期的顺序**来听。这样做，你可以感受到V家历史是如何发展的。
+当然，仅仅通过听歌来了解V家历史并不容易。因此，当你听一首歌时，最好可以搜索一下关于这首歌的背景，比如制作这首歌的P主，关于这首歌的wiki，或这首歌背后的任何有趣的故事。我们希望通过搜索这些信息，可以**收集散落的信息碎片，慢慢建立起V家历史的全貌**。
 
-当然，仅仅通过听歌来了解V家历史并不容易。因此，当你听到一首你喜欢的V曲时，我强烈建议你搜索一下写这首歌的P主，或者关于这首歌的wiki，或这首歌背后的任何有趣的故事。我们希望，通过搜索这些信息，我们可以**收集散落的信息碎片，慢慢建立起V家历史的全貌**。
-
-{{<admonition type=tip title="一些有用的资源" open=false >}}
+{{<admonition type=tip title="去哪搜索？" open=true >}}
 
 这里有一些维基，可能对你搜索在V家历史上发生的事件，或关于某首歌曲的任何信息有帮助：
 
 - [萌娘百科](https://zh.moegirl.org.cn)
 - [Vocaloid Wiki（英语）](https://vocaloid.fandom.com/wiki/Vocaloid_Wiki)
 - [ニコニコ大百科（日语）](https://dic.nicovideo.jp)
 
-这里有一些关于V家历史总结的帖子，由其他人写的。不过，这些都是老帖子，但它们还是很有帮助的：
+这里有一些关于V家历史总结的帖子，由其他人写的。虽然都是些老帖子，但它们还是很有帮助：
 
 - [Vocaloid圈的故事](https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/53643387)
 - [Vocaloid诞生以来意义重大的创作者有哪些？](https://www.zhihu.com/question/47488103/answer/119044265)
@@ -89,7 +87,7 @@ Vocaloid（简称V家）已经有10多年的历史了。不同的Vocaloid Produc
 
 - [YouTube上播放数量超过1000万的VOCALOID歌曲](https://zh.moegirl.org.cn/VOCALOID%E7%A5%9E%E8%AF%9D%E6%9B%B2/YouTube%E6%8A%95%E7%A8%BF)
 
-好，列表有了，可是，这数量是不是太多了😱（写这篇文章的时候已经有800多首百万传说曲了）。我们没有精力去听所有的V曲，不是吗？所以，我们可以根据各种因素对百万传说曲列表进行排序，然后根据你的耐心程度，你（作为一个Miku粉）决定你想听多少首歌。
+好，列表有了，可是（在写这篇文章的时候）列表已经有800多首百万传说曲了😱。我们没有精力去听所有的V曲，不是吗？所以，我们可以根据各种因素对百万传说曲列表进行排序，然后根据你的耐心程度，你（作为一个Miku粉）决定你想听多少首歌。
 
 ### 给百万传说曲列表排序
 
@@ -106,7 +104,7 @@ Vocaloid（简称V家）已经有10多年的历史了。不同的Vocaloid Produc
 
 基本上，我们根据发布日期和达到100万播放量所需的时间，将百万传说曲列表划分为若干格。接下来，我们逐行走动该表。在每一行中，我们从左到右走遍每个格。在每个格中，我们找到满足条件的V曲。例如，第一格是在2007年发布并在100天内达到100万播放量的V曲。然后，当我们听完这一格的V曲后，就可以进入下一格了。
 
-那么，为什么我们要做这样一个表格呢？那让我们来谈谈每一行的意义：
+那么，这个表格的意义是什么呢？其实，表格的每一行都有着重大的意义：
 
 - 第一行：这些V曲在很短的时间内（100天内）达到了100万的播放量。这些歌**对Vocaloid历史上有重大影响**。因此，我们应该优先听听这些歌。比如说[メルト](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm1715919)，[千本桜](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15630734)，[砂の惑星](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm31606995)，[乙女解剖](https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm34470195)等。
 
@@ -118,7 +116,7 @@ Vocaloid（简称V家）已经有10多年的历史了。不同的Vocaloid Produc
   对于那些没有耐心的人来说，你可以止步于此，但如果条件允许，我还是强烈建议你继续去听第三行的V曲。
   {{< /admonition >}}
 
-- 第三行：这一行包含了很多V曲（可能大约300~500首？） 这些V曲花了相当长的时间才达到100万播放量，但那毕竟还是100万播放量。在这一行，你将体验到**Vocaloid音乐风格的多样性**，并看出不同时代的V家有着不同风格的V曲。这就是为什么我仍然强烈建议你听完这一行的V曲。
+- 第三行：这一行包含了很多V曲（可能大约300~500首？） 这些V曲花了相当长的时间才达到100万播放量，但那毕竟还是100万播放量。在这一行，你将体验到**不同时代的V家有着不同风格的V曲**，所有这些年份积累下来才形成了今天**Vocaloid音乐风格的多样性**。这就是为什么我仍然强烈建议你听完这一行的V曲。
 
 {{< admonition type=warning title="请注意Niconico中的假播放量（工作）" open=false >}}