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             <li>Software Engineering Manager.<br />
               I've led and managed teams at <a href="https://www.redfin.com">Redfin</a>, <a href="https://truss.works">Truss</a> and <a href="https://18f.gsa.gov">18F</a>.</li>
-            <li>I was one of the original founder of PyLadies. I've subsequently given talks at PyCon and DjangoCon.</li>
+            <li>I was one of the original founder of PyLadies. I've given talks at PyCon and DjangoCon.</li>
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           <h3>play</h3>
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-            <li>Trombonist, traveler foodie, snowboarder, Los Angeles Kings hockey fan.</li>
-            <li>Performed all over Los Angeles, from football fields to the Warped Tour all the way to the Walt Disney Concert Hall, and everything in between. Ska, reggae, rock, pop, jazz, and classical.</li>
+            <li>Trombonist, traveler, foodie, snowboarder, LA Kings hockey fan.</li>
+            <li>Performed all over Los Angeles, from the stage at Warped Tour to the Walt Disney Concert Hall and everything in between. Ska, reggae, rock, pop, jazz, and classical.</li>
             <li>Vespa enthusiast. I've riden in Baja Mexico and all the way up the west coast of the United States into Vancouver, Canada.</li>
             <li>I've hung out with red pandas in four continents.</li>
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